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on plexi in printmaking... :) William the worm from the labyrinth

updated the logo! tell me what you think!

largest light bulb i have ever seen... and i got 2! needless to say I wont be having any more lighting problems when I take pictures...

LOGO: i sing my heart out

This is my for serious black and white (oops splash of red) logo and color logo. I NEED some feedback please.

Questions:

Is the image of the mic too busy? Are the lines too much?

How is the font? I went with Helvetica Neu, being so clean, to balance out the messiness of the image. Does it work?

Do you read heart as HEART... with replacing the a?

I like the randomness but slightly structured feel of the type placement.... and what about the "for Joanna "at the bottom?

Color logo: hows the blue?

Please I am looking for serious constructive criticism... I am trying to really finish this logo so I can move on to the website!

Thanks!

mic

another idea that would incorporate the wire type in the last post.

I also want to make it not so "realistic" maybe more like a screen print. This is just the initial image I drew.

another logo IDEA

The name changed to "i sing my heart out"

this still needs some cleaning up but wanted to get some thoughts about it

I have another idea that is also in the works that I hope to have posted by tonight.

my new project: sing your heart out

I am currently working on a project for a friend of mine, Ashley. A close friend of hers, Joanna, is my age (24) and has had like 24 brain surgeries since she was 13. Ashley got her degree in music business at Belmont and she is trying to put together a HUGE benefit concert for Joanna because she will be kicked off of her parents insurance in November. I am doing all of the graphic design work including logo, website, tshirts, posters, etc. And I really need some feedback in the process! It is very very important for me to really give my best for Jo. Thanks guys.

This is a letter I received from Ashley forwarded from Jo's parents giving a lot more background information:

To anyone who may be able to help us:

First, please accept our apology if you receive multiple copies of this email.

This letter is a request for information to help resolve a threatening health insurance situation faced by our daughter, Joanna Reid. Joanna has multiple extremely serious medical conditions that have required numerous operations and other major medical interventions. Currently and for the foreseeable future she is completely dependent on continuous pharmaceutical support and multiple weekly appointments for specialty medical treatment. Joanna's medical costs have totaled in excess of $8 million over the last 9 years ($1.3 million in the last 6 months alone). She has been fortunate to have had excellent health insurance coverage since she was a child, but that insurance is due to terminate early this fall. The details are given below, but suffice it to say that there appears to be no options for extending her insurance with the current carrier. Obviously, Joanna will have extreme difficulty in acquiring health care coverage with her severe and extensive pre-existing conditions.

The intended audience for this letter includes professionals knowledgeable about the health insurance industry or individuals and families that have experienced similar circumstances. While information about the successful resolution of a similar case would be wonderful, any information about what has been attempted will be useful. Therefore, we are asking that if you have no information to contribute yourself please forward this email to anyone you know who might be of help.

Joanna is currently insured though the Mail Handlers Benefit Plan (Coventry Health Care) on a Temporary Continuation of Coverage (TCC) as an extension of our family coverage under the Federal Employees Health Benefit Program. TCC is the equivalent of COBRA for federal employee dependents which begins at age 22 and runs 36 months.

Joanna faces life threatening conditions if her access to specialist medical care is interrupted. Among a number of serious conditions Joanna suffers from the following constitute both the most persistent and most expensive to treat.

1. Ehlers-Danlos Syndrome which a tissue defect that has resulted in diminished wound healing capacity and joint fragility and frequent dislocations.
2. Common Variable Immune Deficiency that compromises her ability to fight infection.
3. Severely elevated intra-cranial pressure resulting in the leakage of cerebrospinal fluid with accompanying recurrent bouts of meningitis.
4. A variety of serious neurological conditions that have required and will require a range of neurological and neurosurgical procedures.

This combination results in repeated life threatening episodes that have required numerous neurosurgical and reconstructive surgical operations and extensive hospitalization for meningitis (and other infections) and wound management. The above combination of conditions results in open wounds that harbor infections that pass to the cerebrospinal fluid resulting in meningitis. Joanna has had four cases of meningitis since the beginning of 2010. For these and other reasons Joanna is dependent on continual medical and pharmaceutical support for her survival and will remain that way for an indefinite period of time.

We have explored the options we know about and are left with no clear path. Under our circumstances any gap in coverage could be disastrous. The recently passed health care reform law may provide relief through the establishment of coverage under a high-risk pool. Unfortunately, we cannot count on that because of the requirement of six months without insurance before one can enter a pool. Another provision of the law the extension of coverage for unmarried dependent children to age 26 does not help even for the one year since Joanna is married. We would have an option under Social Security and Medicare for disabled dependents except that it also applies only to unmarried dependents and in any case has a waiting period.

Without access to health insurance a near complete loss of the ability to get this extensive and expensive care for her is very probably a death sentence. This dire projection is not an exaggeration. According to a Harvard University study there are in excess of 45,000 deaths a year in the US directly attributable to the lack of health insurance.

This situation also threatens our family with an economic disaster as we could only sustain the cost of her care for a short while – likely no more than a year or two under the best of circumstances. Joanna’s medication alone is running $75,000/month. We certainly hope that the current crisis can be averted in the near future, but as Joanna's underlying conditions are not correctable with current medical technology that would likely only delay the inevitable.

We have an urgent need for any professional knowledge or experience that could be of benefit. If you have knowledge of a similar case that has been resolved successfully or approaches that do not work please contact us. If you know of anyone who appears to have experienced a similar situation please let us know. Even if you have no information to contribute please forward this email to anyone or any institution that you believe might conceivably be able to help. Once again, any contact may be useful and since Joanna’s situation is already life threatening it is critical that we search as wide a range as possible.

Your help is greatly appreciated.

Joseph Reid and Cindy Stark Reid

For more information about her story visit: www.caringbridge.org/visit/joannareid

My inspiration was kinda a Bonaroo-ish look....

This is my rough starting point of the LOGO....

1. Maybe the mouth should be open to suggest singing? Or maybe it shouldnt be in the shape of a head at all? I started with the head silouhette because of Jo's condition. I am also scared the text maybe become hard to read small.... but it only going to be on the website, tshirts, and posters.... not business cards, etc... so thats why I am thinking it might not be a problem.

2. err.. kinda makes more sense... is the heart cheesy?

Any feed back would be extremely helpful!