added some different colors. I cant have a dark background because the logo will get lost without having like a seperation.
I am torn on the biggest meatballs around.
Barron said "BEANS BEANS" being lined up seems awkward but I tried it a few ways and it just didnt work. Any suggestions?
I am having a little trouble with the placement of "the best cheap eats in town".
i don't love the obvious sexual reference in the "BIGGEST meat BALLS around." i feel like it's trying too hard to be smart but it just comes off as kind of....i don't know. immature? i think it would be funny to some but it might alienate the rest of the audience that will see it.
ReplyDeletei do love the idea you have going on though. and i don't mind the placement of where you have "the best cheap eats in town." i think it reads well and i love how you made the logo a part of the trademark.
ps! i think i like "the biggest MEATBALLS around" but i think you could play around with the placement of those letters more. keep those two words the capital words and do something like you did with your jerk chicken ad. i think that might help too.
ReplyDeletei think these are really clever and true to the client. they kind of remind me of the "beef. it's what's for dinner" ads...know what i'm talking about? no nonsense and straight to the point. anyway..i like the second meatballs ad...but i also appreciate the immaturity of "biggest balls."
ReplyDeleteokay i love the direction you are taking with simply using text as your ad. food pictures would have been so expected and i think this approach is better. Id say keep pushing your ideas with the catch phrases and stick to funny ones. The sexual one, although it doesn't bother me personally, might bother people with children who wanted to take their families to the restaurant. keep it PG! lol
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